Saturday, September 14, 2013

Tier 4 (unsure of letter), following An


“No, Jorge!” Mary screams as Jorge drives the 9 inch santoku into John’s ribs.  
“We talked about this Mary,” Jorge says over coolly over the screams, stabbing John again and again. “You promised this wouldn't happen again. Besides, we have a business to run.” Blood spatters across the dining room as John’s last breaths bubbled out of his mouth.
“I didn’t want to kill him, just hurt him a bit,” Mary wails. “Oh god! Why?!”
“Shut up and get to work,” Jorge said, handing Mary a hacksaw from the garage. “You started this, so you finish it.”
Mary got to work, sawing through skin, muscle, and bone to section the man she had once known. A dark red puddle coagulated on the floor of their home. Jorge filled a beer cooler with ice, and they packed pieces of John into it.  They placed the cooler into the trunk of their car and drove off to the diner.
“At least we won’t have to buy meat this week,” Jorge said.
“Stop it,” Mary said.
"It’ll be so fresh,” Jorge said.
“Stop it,” Mary said.
“Just think of the margins,” Jorge continued, “Ca-ching! We can go to Dorsia this week and you can get the lobster.”
“Stop it, stop it, stop it,” Mary cried.  
Jorge looked over at her with his flat blue eyes. She was sobbing against the passenger window. And that’s when Jorge noticed the bright headlights careening towards them.

Option A) They get grazed at 20 miles per hour, the trunk pops open. All drivers/passengers remain conscious.

Option B) They are T-boned at 45 miles an hour. George remains conscious, but Mary does not. 

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